This term my speech was about how bad McDonald's food are. I learned to have rhetorical questions and use the power of three. For example maybe your patty was overcooked or maybe the chips with too much salt in it? Perhaps you got a headache after eating McDonald's. I used a few ideas that connected to point of the view
and used parts of structure but lacks balance.
When I did my speech it felt like I started to make fast food companies produce healthier food.
Here's a link to my speech
Have you ever thought how
unhealthy mcdonald’s has become?
Maybe it was the pattie that was
overcooked or the chips that had
way too much salt in it perhaps
you got a headache after eating it?
They always don't tell you what it
They could have chemicals, food colour,
fake beef, chips that never go rotten.
Maybe it was only 10 dollars. 10 dollars
When a healthier dinner is 30 dollars
people get easily hooked, the happy
meal toys that make kids beg to go there
It's not just McDonald's it is also KFC
and other junk food companies with
adds that want to make them go to
fast food companies. Here are some facts
from the web.
Once there was a food tester, testing
macca’s chicken nuggets. He left the
nuggets in the fridge for ten days.
He cracked open the nuggets and
there was nothing inside left!.
Where did the chicken go? A real chicken
won't do that. Picture this.
Your at McDonald's and you're
eating the nugget, did you know
you were eating fake chicken?
Also some scientist put the
cheeseburger in stomach acid
and guess what happened? It turned
black and started to melt! would
you like to eat that for dinner?
Fake burger melting into black bits?
McDonald's is lying to all of us.
In Kentucky two people reported
that there were worms in the McDonald's
burge Munching up the cabbage
That must made them not want to
come back anymore.
Would you keep eating McDonald's?
Would you still go to the fast food companies?
Maybe think about what I have told you
and not go there again. we can stop these
fast food companies by stop visiting.
If we stop going there they could start
to produce healthier food or be forced
to shut down